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Post by chels on Jan 24, 2008 21:37:45 GMT -5
Name:shadedbreezeGender: femaleRank:warriorAppearance: a mostly black she cat with a white tail tip, white chest and a splash of white on muzzle.Personality:shadedbreeze is mostly patient, but sometimes becomes annoyed. enjoys hunting.History:Shadedbreeze was clan born and has loyally severed her clan without question.Other: www.nokillkingcounty.org/images/Petimages/OutdoorBlackWhiteCat.jpg (image of shadedbreeze)Password: rubbish cowRoleplaying Sample: It was a lazy day, the sun shone high in the sky, its heat beating down on the black pelt of a she-cat. Shadedbreeze sat on the edge of a sunning rock her tail twitching. She stared into the calm sea, her emerald eyes staring back at her. light reflected off a fish and Shadedbreeze made a dive for it, resulting with a splash of icy water instead. 'rats, I almost had it'. she gave a sighed heavily and stood up. a soft breeze rustled her fur. it was almost past sunhigh, Shadedbreeze began padding back to camp, her paws sinking the soft sand.[/b}
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Post by რoonwhisker on Jan 25, 2008 7:00:40 GMT -5
Alright.
I'm going to accept you, for now.
But there are a few things I'd like you to keep in mind when roleplaying;
1) There is now a size limit per posts 2) You do need to use correct punctuation/capitialization [but I see you did that in your roleplaying sample, so I think we're ok with that.] 3) I am cutting you a lot of slack here, and I don't want to be mean, but maybe you could take a look at Ren's roleplaying help page? 2) Please change your display name to 'Shadedbreeze'
Accepted
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